Damnit, pauhi, you've learned a lot in the last time. To quote yourself:
pauhi wrote:About the effects.. I dont know how to do them! But I'll learn before releasing next movie
That was on January 13th, twosix. Good job on improving your skills, lad.
I honour that with some more detailed feedback from my side:
You've managed to give the whole movie a comic style, which I personally really liked. You do this not only by using comic-alike video effects (
SPLATTER!) but by using bloodsplatter effect, celshading & a comic styled scope for example. Well done, that was a point I was missing on your last movie - the
overall theme.
The
speeding effects were more present than in your last video, but there's still need for improvement in my mind. Some very nice frags were still to fast and therefore not visualized enough. You've done a fragmovie what actually means that you wanna
present your frags. Keep that in the back of your mind while editing a movie. :->
The worst point of your movie was the lack of
sound effects. You've done so with your "headshots" (which were well placed but maybe too loud for my personal taste). Sound effects do some serious work in drawing the viewer's attention into the action.
I enjoyed your
replay since it was an alternation to the rest of the fragscenery, but you could have visualized that replay better. Take a look at sport replays for example (just do so). See how they work with zoom & slow motion and try to figure out why they do so.
Sorry for mainly mentioning the negative points here. I want to a.) motivate you doing further movies and improve your skills, and b.) give ya some hints on doing better movies. Afterall I enjoyed watching your movie.
Now: go ahead, give us some more. :->
Thx (for that movie).
-L0ki